A decent idea turned out bad.... REALLY bad but Im posting it anyways just because I haven't updated in like.... two months
Ornec Ailiph
He loves her, but he knows they don’t love his love for her. In fact, they do not love anything about him, and they always call him sick. But not sick as in fever sick, but sick as in mentally sick, but he knows he is not sick… Well maybe just a little sick, but after all who is not just a little sick? He always loved her, and he swore to God that this feeling would never change. Maybe God is the only one who understands him, well God and Ballard, but Ballard is not really his friend. God always speaks directly to him, and perhaps the hatred of the other people is caused by their jealousy.
Ah! The night is beautiful and it is just the perfect setting for him to take his beloved on a date. “Bzzzzzzzzzzzz” He knows this is God’s sign revealing that He is about to send a message from above. ”Just ignore them all, they will try to ruin your night, but don’t let that happen.” He knows that God is always right, so he tries to prepare himself for the fatuous comments of the other people. After a twenty minutes drive, they arrive at the beach. He loves the beach, but not as much as he loves her. They sit in the old ragged chair that he had brought from his house; they watch the waves break right before reaching their toes for hours and hours. The wet sand sticks to his feet creating a truly relaxing moment. Although the sand does not stick in her feet, he still loves her no matter what.
His body shivers with the cold waters, but she is not bothered by them because for the past few months she has become very intimate with the cold. He does not care about her cold body, because he truly loves her. His body mimics the gentle and yet powerful motions of the sea. Soon many bystanders gather around them and give him a look of disgust and pity. They call him insane, but he does not care because he loves her. Following God’s instructions, he tries to ignore them, until they forcefully try to separate their bond.
He shrikes and screams, but they overcome his strength. They point at him and call him sick, but he knows he is not sick, maybe sick of love but not really sick. After breaking their physical bond, the they toss his beloved in the sea, make a prayer and finally release the “mad man”. This “mad man” decides to jump in the sea in search of his now lost love. Someone tries to impede him from jumping, but another does not let him take any action thus allowing the man to jump. The man who tried to save him gets angry, but the other other whispers on his ear: “Let him jump. It is better for him, because poor man never got over the loss of his wife that died a few months ago.”
Days passed by, and the two bodies were found, he died holding his beloved wife. Yes, he kept the promise he had made to God, he truly loved her.
Friday, October 24, 2008
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